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  • Jun. 16th, 2009 at 9:40 PM

Well folks - here it is the writer's block!

So far all I've come up with the homework is maybe a person who's disabled from the waist upwards, arranges euthanasia but comes back to life reincarnated as a Lark....... hmmmm.  Can see I might have to change to the other homework subject

WL :o)

On using LJ More

  • Jun. 13th, 2009 at 7:59 PM


Hi all

Just been thinking how to use the LJ more -  I have about 4 weeks of a creative writing course to go so my plan is to post up my homework each week from idea to completion [sometimes not completion].

I thought to do this because some writers just write and are extremely successful or not and the same is true for people who attend courses.  I also though some people might like to use some of the exercises.

So in class this week the one person drew a shape any shape from your head, then someone else made that shape into something else, then someone else wrote a story of that picture

This week the homework is either:-

1.Fake a well know story
OR
2.Lark


 

So I know not whether to chose 1 or 2 yet but so far I found this old picture of a sunset inversion during a hot air balloon flight - it kind of represents what a Lark [bird] might see when flying along early evening.

Happy weekend
WL

The Lost Chord

  • Jun. 10th, 2009 at 7:20 PM


THE LOST CHORD

 

Sean was 7 years old when he travelled with his parents to Cork to visit his sick Great Uncle Seamus known affectionately to him as GUS. 

 

Sean was scared – his parents had told him how sick GUS was and that they must make the most of the visit. However ill GUS appeared when they arrived, Sean was not to be rude and was asked to sit and listen to his Uncle.

 

As the Citroen wound its way down to the small town the sun hid itself behind the clouds and Sean felt a shiver, what if he’s already dead? He’d got up 20 mins after they’d sent him to bed and parked himself half way up the stairs, this being the best place to get information when you needed to know what was going on at 7 years of age. 

 

Sean overheard them talking of the Cancer and how the Dr had told the family he hadn’t got long to go so Sean prepared himself for the worst even though his parents, John and Myraid, thought it best to keep him in the dark – what where they thinking!

 

On arriving at the grey slate house, Great Aunt Mary met them at the door she seemed resigned to the events of the day as Sean pushed past her, to take the stairs two at a time.

 

“Sean my boy, you’re here, great, great, said GUS as he pulled himself up with great effort as the boy threw himself onto the bed wrapping his arms around the old man. 

 

“Hey hey hey what’s all this, come on be brave now my boy” said GUS as he whipped away Sean’s salty tears.

“But GUS, I heard them, they say you won’t have long, are you really going to die? Please don’t leave me”.

“That I am my boy” sighed GUS – it comes to us all and I’ve had my time. Look you’ve come a long way it’s nearly time for bed and I have something for you before you have your cocoa” 

“What is it GUS” Sean was excited now.

“Over there boy” said the old man as he pointed at an aging oak chest.

“That’s right, open it up and bring me that case”

 

Sean lifted a triangular shaped case from the chest and brought it over to the sick man who coughed for a long time before pulling himself forward. Looking into Sean’s face he ventured “there you go my boy, open it up now, hurry there’s not much time – they’ll be up here in a minute whisking you away from me before you know it”.

 

Hurrying, Sean opened the case – it was lined with emerald green velvet, and inside was a harp, it was painted purple with inlets of green flowers, it was the most beautiful thing Sean had ever seen.

“What is it GUS” Sean’s eyes were wide now.

“Why it’s a harp boy – look, I’ll show you” and with that GUS took the harp from Sean and played 6 lovely chords making a beautifully magikal sound. 

 

Sean notices a collection of small creatures gathering at the window as GUS gently made the chords. 

“Now you try” he said, handing the harp to Sean. 

“But I don’t know how” said Sean, I need lessons GUS.

“Lessons pah, this isn’t a standard instrument boy, it’s a magik harp!  And I decide who plays it and they do. Simple! Go on now try it” and he handed the harp to Sean.

 

At that point the little mammals at the window shuffled closer in anticipation.  Sure enough, Sean leant the harp towards him and straight away his fingers moved by themselves creating the same sound as the old man had. As Sean moved through the six chords, the animals sat wide eyed at the window in amazement.

 

Chord one, deep. Chord two, less deep. Chord three, level. Chord 4, high. Chord 5 – oddly nothing, no sound came out for Chord 5. The animals at the window sighed out in unison, deflated. Then came the highest, Chord 6 provoking the animals to chatter in their own language at the window.

 

“Give him a chance you lot” GUS barked as he inclined his chin towards them – they jumped and looked towards Sean apologetically.

 

That’s great my boy, well done, you can play it, it’s yours to do go to work with”

“But GUS, the 5th Chord, why didn’t it play for me, like it did for you?”   And as he said this, Sean tried the chords again but the 5th chord still made no sound at all.

 

“GUS! What do I do” said Sean.

“Ah – my boy, number 5 is the “Lost Chord” – and you have to find it…. “   With that the old man lay back on his pillow and closed his eyes.

 

“Wait! GUS what are you doing! Don’t go! Don’t leave me! Where do I find it?”

GUS momentarily opened his eyes and put his hand over Sean’s shaking wrist. 

“In your heart boy, you find it…. cough… in your heart” and with that the old man gave a gentle cough and passed away.

 

An A

  • Jun. 10th, 2009 at 6:55 PM

Hi Everyone

Hope yr all having a fabo eve - am going to go off and read yr journals but here's and edited version.

Hmmm

  • Jun. 10th, 2009 at 1:24 PM

Just realised my story [previously posted] needs a good edit!  Should have done this prior to uploading - ooops!

Anyway, here's a thing - I showed my brother some of my poetry - and he came back with the following - he does take the micky but hey I think it's quite good

most people ignore
most poetry because
most poetry ignores
most people

Hmmmmmmmm - mental note - do not discuss writing with family
:o)

On Being Brave

  • Jun. 9th, 2009 at 8:21 PM

Hi Ya'll :o)

Just thought I'd be brave and stick something up here - feel free to comment - openly - don't worry, I can take it .....!

LoL
WoodLady


THE LOST CHORD

 

Sean was 7 years old when he travelled with his parents to Cork to visit his sick Great Uncle Seamus known to him affectionately as GUS. 

 

Sean was scared – his parents had told him how sick GUS was and that they must make the most of the visit and, however sick GUS appeared when they arrived, he wasn’t to be rude and to sit and listen to his Uncle.

 

As the Citroen wound its way down to the small town the sun hid itself behind the clouds and Sean felt a shiver, what if he’s already dead? He’d got up 20 mins after they’d sent him to bed and placed himself half way up the stairs, the best place to get information, when you needed to know what was going on when you were 7. 

 

He overheard them talking of the Big C and how the Dr had told the family he hadn’t got long to go. So he was ready for the worst even though his parents John and Myraid thought it best to keep him in the dark – what were they thinking.

 

Great Aunt Mary met them at the door and he flung it back, running past her and up the stairs, two at a time..

 

“Sean my boy, you’re here, great, great, said GUS as he pulled himself up with great effort and the boy threw himself onto the bed and wrapped his arms around the old man. 

 

“Hey hey hey, what’s all this, be brave now my boy” said GUS as he whipped away Sean’s salty tears.

“But GUS, I heard them, they say you won’t have long, are you really going to die? Please don’t leave me”.

“That I am my boy” sighed GUS – it comes to us all and I’ve had my time. Look you’ve come a long way it’s nearly time for bed and I have something for you before you have your cocoa” 

“What is it GUS” Sean was excited now.

“Over there boy” the old man pointed at an oak chest.

“That’s right open it up and bring me that case”

 

Sean lifted a triangular shaped case from the chest and brought it over to the sick man who coughed for a long time before pulling himself forward. Looking into Sean’s face he ventured “there you go my boy, open it up now, hurry there’s not much time – they’ll be up to take you away from me to your bed soon”.

 

Hurrying, Sean opened the case – it was lined with emerald green velvet, and inside was a harp, it was painted purple with inlets of green flowers, it was the most beautiful thing Sean had ever seen.

“What is it GUS” Sean’s eyes were wide now

“Why it’s a harp boy – look, I’ll show your” and with that GUS took the harp from Sean and played 6 lovely chords making a beautify sound. 

 

Sean notices a collection of animals at the window as GUS gently made the chords sing out. 

“Now you try” he said, handing the harp to Sean. 

“But I don’t know how” said Sean, I need lessons GUS!

“Lessons pahh, this isn’t a standard instrument boy, it’s a magik harp – I decide who can play it – and then they do,  simple – go on try now” and he handed Sean the harp.

 

At that point the animals at the window shuffled closer in anticipation. Sure enough, Sean leant the harp towards him and straight away his fingers moved by themselves creating the same sound as the old man had. As Sean moved through the six chords, the animals sat wide eyed at the window in amazement.

 

Chord one, deep, chord two, less deep, chord three, level, chord 4, high, chord 5 – nothing! No sound came out for chord 5! The animals at the window sighed out in unison, deflated. Then it came the highest Chord 6 – the animals chattered in their own language at the window.

“Give him a chance you lot” GUS barked at them – they jumped and looked towards Sean apologetically.

 

That’s great my boy, well done, you can play it, it’s yours to do with what you will – work at it boy, work”

“But GUS the 5th chord why won’t it play like it did for you” As Sean said this he tried the chords again but again the 5th chord wouldn’t make a sound.

 

“GUS! What do I do” said Sean desperate now.

“Ah – my boy, number 5 is the “Lost Chord” – and you have to find it…. “   With that the old man lay back on his pillow and closed his eyes.

 

“Wait! GUS what are you doing! Don’t go! Don’t leave me! Where do I find it?” Sean was trembling as tears pricked at his eyes and then, momentarily, Gus opened his eyes. Putting his and over Sean’s he spluttered “In your heart boy, you find it…. in your heart” and with that the old man gave a gentle cough and passed away.

 




 

oh Godess!

  • Jun. 3rd, 2009 at 8:06 PM


..... how dangerous is this LJing thang after 3 glasses of Sauvignon Blanc ! 

Arrrrgh so here I am; writing class tomorrow night and 1 page homework has extended to 3 pages - got carried away with knowledge of pending interview as a Fundraiser  for small furry creatures survival - please let them give me a chance even though I have no clue how to fundraise! - and now, am not in any fit state to edit homework - HAS ANYONE BEEN HERE or is it just me?!?!

Before I ramble on - rules say I have to insert a photo or you'll get bored.... here you go - here's a fantastic swan l call him Bevis ... aka Bevis and Buthead - it makes more sense if you note their call.....



Anyway, yes am pretty close here but I tamed the thing after a couple of snaps of the orange beak on my ar*s and 2 loafs of hovis finest ..........................................

I do have day off tomorrow so I can sit here and communicate with my new on line friends and oggle at Hugh Fernley Whittingstall shaving sheep - lordy!  Enough about me! 

How are you all.  Please help me - how do I make something 3 pages long into 1 especially as Chris has now introduced at least another 5 pages where James gets eaten by a Badger!  Which further provoked my imagination to thing of 6 more pages where he comes back as badger devil to haunt his best mate - arrrrrgh!   

Peace and Love 
WL

Writing and Stuff

  • Jun. 2nd, 2009 at 7:28 PM


Well hello to everyone and Chris and all his great on line mates for saying hello.

Been looking at your great journals everyone - they're great and I really love this idea [ Chris will probably tell me people have been doing this on line for years now and it's not just a new thing out this week invented on by Dragons Den! ]

Think I kind of get it now - I'm supposed to talk to everyone and everyone talks to everyone and everyone is an on line family - sorry I digress writing writing focus ....

So last night I tried in vain to find out why my stories keep morphing - maybe someone will enlighten me further (?)

Anyway that also digressed and I ended up finding out about archetypes in story telling - ventured off into a bit of Carl Jung before reading about the archetypes of "shapshifter" in most stories and how they can change - that's good stuff eh - basically stories generally follow real life.



Been trying to think of an interesting picture to put on line - other than myself and thereby blowing the cover :o) 

So here's my dead Mog - that probably seems weird but I loved him so much - he's dead in a jar now (I know it's a bit dark) but he was great when alive very magikal, blue brown Burmese - maybe he should go in a story as a kind of spirit cat......? :o)

Errr well not much else [for fear of boring my new community] and better try and sort out this story that I messed up for homework.  Hmm should I have the hero shot now or left half alive to crawl to the end of the garden!? 

Hopefully the computer at work won't break tomorrow eh Chris

Wishing you a steady wordflow
WL :o)

First Blog

  • Jun. 1st, 2009 at 1:04 PM


Hi All

Well writing was pretty good over weekend managed to edit some of the big book which may or may not be a bit too Philip Pullman.

However, started another short story for my writing class about a guy, James who goes to india for a yoga course and falls in love with one of the other pupils - trouble is, they were supposed to run off into the indian sunset together but as with all my stories it change ...

Instead of falling in love he tricks the Sam, the guy into investing money into a new business venture in Burma with him, induces him into making a 60K cash transfer to the indian bank where they are staying.  Instead of getting on the plan with his seemingly loved one, he hugs him swaps the rucksacks over containing the cash and jumps on a different aeroplane!

On his return to the UK, thinking his Burmese friend is winging his way to Burma with an empty rucksack, he runs into an old friend and offers to buy her barn to convert into an Ashtanga Yoga Study. 

The friend takes up the offer but when he arrives on site to open the barn up and start work, he faces 3 Burmese offices with riffles aimed at him - Sam is 1 step ahead of him and send his Burmese brother ahead to the UK to murder James!

Anyway that's my bit for today - back to cheese and chocolate

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